Via Radio Nacional de Venezuela:
Red Suramericana para la prevención y control del dengue. [South American network for prevention and control of dengue] Excerpt, with my translation:
La creación de la Red Suramericana para la Prevención y Control del Dengue, es una de las resoluciones aprobadas por las ministras y ministros de Salud que participaron en la II Reunión Ordinaria de UNASUR Salud, efectuada en la Ciudad de Cuenca-Ecuador los días 29 y 30 de abril.
The creation of the South American Network for Prevention and Control of Dengue is one of the resolutions approved by the health ministers who took part in the II Ordinary Reunion of UNASUR Health, held in Cuenca, Ecuador, on April 29 and 30.
La delegación venezolana estuvo encabezada por el viceministro de Redes de Servicios de Salud, Iver Gil, quien fuera designado por el ministro del Poder Popular para la Salud, Luis Reyes Reyes, en cumplimiento del mandato presidencial de fortalecer la Unión de Naciones Suramericanas (UNASUR) como parte de la agenda de integración social y la solidaridad entre los pueblos.
The Venezuelan delegation was headed by the vice-minister of Health Network Services, Iver Gil, who was designated by the minister of Popular Power for Health, Luis Reyes Reyes, in carrying out the presidential mandate of strengthening the Union of South American Nations (UNASUR), as part of the agenda of social integration and solidarity among peoples.
Apart from the news value of this story, I'm posting it as an example of webwriting in Spanish.
In English, text for the web should be very brief: short words, short sentences, short paragraphs.
Spanish and Portuguese tend to need more words than English does to convey a particular statement. But I'm often struck by the sheer length of many sentences in news stories on Latin American websites.
I try to stick reasonably closely to the syntax of the original text, but it often means English sentences that are two and three times longer than comparable text would be on an American or Canadian website.
Maybe Latin Americans just have longer attention spans than we do.
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